In the winter, we take a time to escape the leaf ridden city so washed of color. When Santa has taken with him the lights of the season, and the night. After the new-born year has grown tired of its celebration.
If Jack Frost allows, we run before candy swoons our hearts, but not until our mentors worn our minds. He gives toddler high snow, and roads for skating in relentless spirits.
“If this continues we might not get into Tahoe. If it dies then revives we may get snowed in.”
Few days and no change, but with a new week comes hope. The sun bathes the trail and Old Frost leaves to rest. Two nights gave their time – to our preparation – save those hours we dwindled and wondered in anticipation.
The third we settle in- a familiar haven – we escaped.
Good detail throughout the story. What's the fixed action and moving action? It wasnt clear.
ReplyDeletethis was a good story! the only thing that needed help for me is the moving and fixed action. but over all good job
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